“Today, let’s write a poem about water. And/or a haiku. And/or use a simile.”
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Water drops skew sight,
like clouds raining tears, smudging
silver eyeliner.
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Softly, silk droplets
fall like sands through an hourglass,
like minutes filling
a river of liquid time,
rushing into the future.
This post is my first attempt participating in one of WordPress’s Writing Workshops, and part of my scary effort to become a better writer!
Perhaps I should have started with Writing 101, but here I am beginning with Writing 201: Poetry… Wish me luck!
A bit late to the game, but truly the best haiku examples I’ve seen – period. The imagery was masterful. Well done.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your encouragement! 🙂
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Well done! I liked it. Kudos.
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Thank you! I really appreciate your encouragement! 🙂
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You’re very welcome!
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These are amazing. I so admire people who can write poetry. Well done!
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Thank you! Maybe it’s beginners luck. I usually write random thoughts on scraps of paper in a poetic style, and then they are forgotten, unread. Participating in this workshop is a way for me to fight my fear of people reading what I write and a way to get me to sit down and write with something in mind. 🙂
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